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By Joanna L. Krotz
Do you
want to read a really bad sales letter? Check this one out.
A DECADE OF R&D IS FINALLY PAYING OFF I'm writing to you today to let
you know about the really terrific coffeemaker I've developed. First of all, I know it's TRULY terrific because I spent years studying coffeemakers of all kinds, from drip to perk to
electric. I then expanded my field of research to include the commercial coffeemakers, and I learned all the possible secrets of what makes the java flow at the big cafe chains.
Now, SEVEN YEARS LATER, I'm ready to let you in on the fruits of all my RESEARCH. I've developed the EZ CAFE and, let me tell you, it will make all other coffeemakers you
have ever seen pale by comparison.
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